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Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:47AM

06: Introduce new tools with care

DB David Baldwin Public Seen by 270
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David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:49AM

I think whizzbang is meant to be hyphenated. One or two z's, but two parts.

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David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:51AM

p. 38: If we’re used to do our decisions--should be "doing" or "if we used to"

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David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:51AM

p.38: snapping at you.
Mot importantly,

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David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:53AM

p. 38: now: has the original--needs an additional space after the colon

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David Baldwin Thu 26 Apr 2018 12:54AM

p. 38: adopt a new thing, build a habit, it’s a difficult -- I think it needs to be "is a difficult", grammatically