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April 26th, 2018 00:47

06: Introduce new tools with care

David Baldwin
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David Baldwin April 26th, 2018 00:49

I think whizzbang is meant to be hyphenated. One or two z's, but two parts.

David Baldwin

David Baldwin April 26th, 2018 00:51

p. 38: If we’re used to do our decisions--should be "doing" or "if we used to"

David Baldwin

David Baldwin April 26th, 2018 00:51

p.38: snapping at you.
Mot importantly,

David Baldwin

David Baldwin April 26th, 2018 00:53

p. 38: now: has the original--needs an additional space after the colon

David Baldwin

David Baldwin April 26th, 2018 00:54

p. 38: adopt a new thing, build a habit, it’s a difficult -- I think it needs to be "is a difficult", grammatically