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[post] pirate reaction on Ecolo's proposals

J Josse Public Seen by 21

With CDH wanting to get the PS out of the government and as such inviting Ecolo, Ecolo puts forwards some propositions to get rid of the bad political culture. On https://pad.pirateparty.be/p/ecolo you will find a pad in French with a summary article and a reference to the wiki of Patrick as a reaction to those proposals. Do not be afraid to add your comments or even improve the article.

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Thierry Fenasse Sun 25 Jun 2017 8:32PM

Do you have a «dead line» about the when you wish to publish the post?
thanks for this thread by the way!
:pray:

J

Josse Sun 25 Jun 2017 9:23PM

Let us give ourselves at least until Saturday. I don't expect the political situation to be solved by then anyways.

J

Josse Sat 1 Jul 2017 10:57AM

@hgo made the first part so beautiful that I don't know what to do with the rest.

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HgO Sat 1 Jul 2017 7:11PM

Ahah thank you :blush: I'm currently working again on this article, and if I'm not done tonight, I will work again tomorrow evening. I hope to finish this before the end of the week-end ^

I think that what you wrote is already great (for what I read), but it just needs rephrasing (as French isn't your native language, that's normal ;) )

I'm not sure about the meaning of some sentences though. Maybe I'll put my questions in the chat.

Yes you can start to translate the first part (Introduction + "Ethique des mandataire"). For the title, do as you want, we just need to keep the global meaning (in French the actual title sounds a bit strange to me, that's why I proposed something else).

@everybody Feel free to help ;) Just proof-reading would be already very much welcome :D

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Josse Sat 1 Jul 2017 11:02AM

If some part is ok, I could start translating too.

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HgO Sun 2 Jul 2017 7:19PM

Okay, we are almost done ! :D There are a few paragraphs that still need some work, and then we will have to write down the conclusion.

@josse we would need some clarifications on certain sentences :/ We are not sure about what you meant sometimes...

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Josse Sun 2 Jul 2017 10:00PM

I tried to answer where there were question marks. It would be good to have @patrickinstalle 's ideas on this.

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Josse Sun 2 Jul 2017 10:11PM

There is quite some things that could be cleared out more and some interesting thinking we could do. E.g. I thought about creating an image to show the differences between the ideal city council and the current city council and how it interacts with citizens and how the agenda would be different between them. That could make the case for showing how important it is to change those.

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Josse Tue 4 Jul 2017 9:55PM

PI

Patrick Installé Wed 5 Jul 2017 8:55AM

I am sorry not respond last days. I had a system crash. I should reconstruct it.
It still need work but I am online now.

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